Don't let the budget and stars and unusual camera angles fool you.
I'd call this a first draft of a script, but seeing as it's based on a novel and the director who adapted it is accomplished, all I can call this is a failure of a script.
I love a non-standard screenplay. I have no objection to a kind of horror/satire where the characters need to be flat and 2-dimensional for that style of storytelling to work. They Live would be an example of such a film. Nor do I object to movies with unhappy endings. What I object to is going nowhere with those kinds of choices.
Nearly every scene in this movie has dialogue and character that is perfunctory or on-the-nose. Characters are inconsistent without any point or payoff to it, not even in the tone of the movie or the observations of those characters. Character motivations are at times entirely broken for the sake of the scene needing to go somewhere else.
Similarly, half of the scenes have no point to them, not even in the subtler sense of tone-building and anecdotal observation.
What was attempted was a movie about societal fears all colliding and coming together. What was acheived is 'how not to write a non-standard screenplay', which is doubly painful when we are in need of better non-standard screenwriting.
As a cherry on top, this script uses the word 'nonplussed' in the solecistic way without gaining anything from the character using it wrong. The word means 'so confused or surprised as to not know what to do'. Pretentious idiots use it to mean 'not impressed' or 'not bothered'.
I'd call this a first draft of a script, but seeing as it's based on a novel and the director who adapted it is accomplished, all I can call this is a failure of a script.
I love a non-standard screenplay. I have no objection to a kind of horror/satire where the characters need to be flat and 2-dimensional for that style of storytelling to work. They Live would be an example of such a film. Nor do I object to movies with unhappy endings. What I object to is going nowhere with those kinds of choices.
Nearly every scene in this movie has dialogue and character that is perfunctory or on-the-nose. Characters are inconsistent without any point or payoff to it, not even in the tone of the movie or the observations of those characters. Character motivations are at times entirely broken for the sake of the scene needing to go somewhere else.
Similarly, half of the scenes have no point to them, not even in the subtler sense of tone-building and anecdotal observation.
What was attempted was a movie about societal fears all colliding and coming together. What was acheived is 'how not to write a non-standard screenplay', which is doubly painful when we are in need of better non-standard screenwriting.
As a cherry on top, this script uses the word 'nonplussed' in the solecistic way without gaining anything from the character using it wrong. The word means 'so confused or surprised as to not know what to do'. Pretentious idiots use it to mean 'not impressed' or 'not bothered'.
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